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<!--Generated by Squarespace Site Server v5.8.4 (http://www.squarespace.com/) on Sun, 06 Dec 2009 15:23:29 GMT--><feed xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/"><title>Law enforcement</title><subtitle>Law enforcement</subtitle><id>http://releaseme.squarespace.com/law-enforcement/</id><link rel="alternate" type="application/xhtml+xml" href="http://releaseme.squarespace.com/law-enforcement/"/><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://releaseme.squarespace.com/law-enforcement/atom.xml"/><updated>2005-01-10T19:16:22Z</updated><generator uri="http://www.squarespace.com/" version="Squarespace Site Server v5.8.4 (http://www.squarespace.com/)">Squarespace</generator><entry><title>Understandable, but still frustrating...</title><id>http://releaseme.squarespace.com/law-enforcement/2005/1/10/understandable-but-still-frustrating.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://releaseme.squarespace.com/law-enforcement/2005/1/10/understandable-but-still-frustrating.html"/><author><name>Barney Lerten</name></author><published>2005-01-10T18:36:07Z</published><updated>2005-01-10T18:36:07Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<P>I totally understand why police officers frequently have to save doing a press release for the end of their shift, quite frequently in the middle of the night, etc. They have real, police-type work to do. But as someone on the receiving end of those releases, I have a small request: Have someone else, fresher than yourself, read them over before you send them out - and maybe, have THEM rewrite it for clarity, if need be. I&#8217;d rather get it late, and clean, then fast and &#8230; problematic.</P>
<P>The media will never be the top priority for a line officer or somesuch, but &#8230; when basic facts are missing or so convoluted as to defy straightening, it doesn&#8217;t do anyone any good. So I urge all supervisors at police departments to at least work on a check list for the deputies, etc. so they can be sure to fill the bill (names, ages, vehicle description, etc.) - and to hold training sessions. Heck, I&#8217;d volunteer to help with them, because it would help <EM>me</EM> as much as it would help them!</P>
]]></content></entry><entry><title>Police releases - the 5 Ws and H</title><id>http://releaseme.squarespace.com/law-enforcement/2004/9/26/police-releases-the-5-ws-and-h.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://releaseme.squarespace.com/law-enforcement/2004/9/26/police-releases-the-5-ws-and-h.html"/><author><name>Barney Lerten</name></author><published>2004-09-26T21:03:24Z</published><updated>2004-09-26T21:03:24Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<P><FONT size=2>Everyone knows the&nbsp;Five Ws (Who, What, When, Where, Why) and H (how), right?</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=2>But I'm not going to sit here and say I expect a trained law enforcement official to be thinking all that clearly about that at 4 a.m., when a press release is the last thing between them and a soft, warm bed<IMG height=25 alt="Can't write anything." src="http://releaseme.squarespace.com/universal/images/emoticons/Cant_write_anything_emoticon.gif" width=22></FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=2>So here are some examples, from a Bend PD release done at that ... wee hour of the morning. It talked of a restaurant robbery, and included the victim's name - something Bend police do, but newspapers do NOT include, usually, unless the person was injured and we need to tell their condition, etc.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=2><IMG style="FLOAT: right; MARGIN: 0px 0px 8px 8px" alt="" src="http://releaseme.squarespace.com/resource/bendpdcar62904-1a.jpg?userId=10501&amp;fileId=34446">This release told that a gunman had entered the restaurant, confronted the employee "and demanded she give him money. The suspect then left the business through a back door..."</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=2>Two things missing there - ones we can ASSume as reporters, but dare not: Did the worker GIVE him any money? (I know they usually say "undisclosed amount of cash" - that's fine, but at least make that clear!) And ... was she hurt? No, of course not, the release would have said. Still ... a good reporter will feel far more comfortable (and not need to reach for the phone) ... if it makes CLEAR that the worker was/was not injured.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=2>It might have taken the lieutenant five minutes more to add that. But ... the recipient would feel that much more comfortable about not ASSuming anything. </FONT></P>]]></content></entry></feed>